Thursday, 5 July 2018
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Hi im Ben, great piece of writing, next time reread your writing. visit my blog.
ReplyDeleteHi Manaaki I go to pompallier catholic school in kaitaia i love moto riding,diving,fishing etc this is a exciting piece of writing I liked how you told us what the wolf liked to do. But next time you could proof read and add some better words. visit my blog. https://pcscohenl.blogspot.com/
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