Tuesday, 21 May 2019

Moment in time


LI:Learning to write about a moment in time captain cook arrives at Turanganui a Kiwa in October 1769.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Manaaki,
    I like the way you have shared your moment in time writing as a DLO on a Google Drawing. You have given me a different point of view to Captain Cook's landing.
    The way you have designed your drawing means the words are supported by your choice of images, text colour and placement of text on the page.
    Did you know that the bottom image you have chosen is one fo Captain Cook landing in another Pacific Island, not Gisborne?
    Mā te wā
    Mrs Torrie

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